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Dear depression. by ~greengirl-x:icongreengirl-x:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Open


Dear depression,
will I ever be rid of you?
It seems no matter how much I struggle to escape you,
you're always ahead of me - one step in front.
The further away I manage to get, the harder I fall when you drag me back.

Dear happiness,
I miss you.
Will I ever be with you for more than a flying visit?
Or is this the most you'll ever be with me?

Dear life,
I'm fed up of you screwing me over.
I hate that I'm trapped within your grasp.

Dear death,
I'm wishing, I'm begging… please will you come and release me?
©2009 ~greengirl-x
:icongreengirl-x:

Author's Comments

This is the product of me not being able to get to sleep for ages last night, lol.

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~axeon2 Nov 2, 2009, 2:43:49 PM
how does not bein able to sleep want u to be relased :S but other then that u okay and it is very good unless it not suppose to be then it is very emotional :D

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its about time every1 knew who dean is
:iconjacksblade:
~JacksBlade Nov 2, 2009, 4:23:39 PM
interesting...I like it. :thumbsup:

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You found me, When no one else was looking. How did you know just where i would be?. You broke threw all of my confusion. The ups and the downs and you still didn't leave. i guess that you saw what nobody could see. You found me. :huggle:
:iconlaffytaffy5:
~laffytaffy5 Nov 2, 2009, 5:45:26 PM
^-^ this ones very good lol its good you wrote this *hugs* but sleep is always good too psst, im sure your two steps ahead of drepession ^-^

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I Make My Hearts With Wings Because They Have A Tendancy To Fly Away.
:iconstu04:
~stu04 Nov 2, 2009, 11:51:46 PM
really good. really emotional in a sad way =(
good though =) x
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~midnight-wanderer14 Nov 2, 2009, 11:52:22 PM
i like it. its a different way of looking at how people feel etc. really nicely done. *hug* hope ure alright xx

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Still Wandering Alone...Through empty spaces...And abandoned places.

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:icontasharose:
=tasharose Nov 3, 2009, 8:30:53 AM
:huggle:

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. if all our life is but a dream
. fantastic posing greed
. then we should feed our jewelery to the sea
. for diamonds do appear to be
. just like broken glass to me
♫
:icongreengirl-x:
~greengirl-x Nov 3, 2009, 10:58:55 AM
i didn't really understand that comment if i'm honest, lol.

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Elphaba: What?! What are you looking at? Oh, do I have something in my teeth? Okay, let's get this over with. No, I'm not seasick, yes, I've always been green, no, I didn't chew grass as a child.
:icongreengirl-x:
~greengirl-x Nov 3, 2009, 10:59:17 AM
thank you :]

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Elphaba: What?! What are you looking at? Oh, do I have something in my teeth? Okay, let's get this over with. No, I'm not seasick, yes, I've always been green, no, I didn't chew grass as a child.
:icongreengirl-x:
~greengirl-x Nov 3, 2009, 11:03:11 AM
thanks :hug:
i know i know, i'll try and get more sleep for you lol.
and i'm not..

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Elphaba: What?! What are you looking at? Oh, do I have something in my teeth? Okay, let's get this over with. No, I'm not seasick, yes, I've always been green, no, I didn't chew grass as a child.
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